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Help Build
the Book
Itself.
Beta readers don't just read Operation Nachthexen — they shape it. This is the work that happens before publication exists.
The Novel
Operation Nachthexen
It is 1943. Nadezhda "Nadya" Kozlova — a pilot with the Soviet 588th Night Bomber Regiment — is shot down behind German lines on a routine mission.
She doesn't make it back to her regiment. She surfaces inside a partisan cell with a single objective: sabotage a German weapons facility before the women still bombing overhead pay the price.
Coordinating her ground operation with the Night Witches flying overhead, Nadya must navigate forced labor camps, a German defector she isn't sure she can trust, and the weight of a war that never asked women to survive it — only to win it.
I don't want beta readers who will tell me what's working. I want readers who will tell me where I lost them — and why. — Astrid Cartesian
The History Behind the Story
Real Women.
Real Missions.
Real Stakes.
The Soviet 588th Night Bomber Regiment was an all-female unit that flew under cover of darkness in Po-2 biplanes — canvas and wood aircraft originally designed for crop dusting. They cut their engines on final approach, gliding silent over German positions to release their payloads before the enemy could react.
The Germans called them Nachthexen — Night Witches. The name was fear dressed up as contempt. These women flew anyway, sortie after sortie, night after night.
Operation Nachthexen is grounded in primary research: aircraft specifications, mission records, named pilots, documented sorties. Getting the history right is not incidental to this book — it is the point. Beta readers help hold that line.
```This is a story about resistance — what it demands, what it costs, and what it means when the state turns on its own people. The Night Witches' history is not distant. It is instructive. Beta readers who understand that will read this manuscript differently — and better.
```The Role
What Beta Readers Get.
What Beta Readers Do.
First Access
You receive the full working manuscript of Operation Nachthexen — before it goes to editors, before it goes to ARC readers, before it goes anywhere.
Real Feedback, Not Reviews
Beta reading is not reviewing. I'll ask you to track where tension drops, where you lost the thread, where the history felt forced — and where Nadya earned your trust. Honest and specific beats enthusiastic and vague every time.
Guided Questions
You won't be left staring at a blank page. I'll provide a structured reader response guide — specific questions about pacing, character, historical authenticity, and narrative tension — so your feedback lands where it's needed.
Inside the World Now
Beta readers get immediate access to The Nachthexen on Substack — the deep research, pilot histories, and essays that sit behind every scene. The more you know going in, the sharper your read.
Your Name in the Book
Beta readers who complete the full manuscript and submit feedback will be acknowledged by name in the finished novel. This work matters. It will be credited.
A Reasonable Timeline
I'll ask for feedback within a defined reading window — typically four to six weeks from delivery. Life happens; I'll communicate clearly and expect the same in return.